Alan Tegel
Dec 20, 2020

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Thanks for the feedback.

What you called out was my intent in the poem. My attempt and view was not to fix, but to be there for the person emotionally and mentally.

The last stanza signals to the view of her fighting the battles, my view was to provide a safe harbor for the partner.

But I do get your point 110% as the desire to fix is something I have done personally in my relationships.

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Alan Tegel
Alan Tegel

Written by Alan Tegel

Lover of people, Texas Feminist Liberal Democrat, Horse Farm, High Tech Gadget ENFP Guy, and someone who appreciates the struggle of women and wants to help.

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